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Robopoop
04-10-2008, 03:43 AM
After thinking or pretty much a lot of the days since I joined, I cant seem to come out straight with a Hentai story idea to work on, so here I am wanting some feedback over what Ive thought about. Theres a very wide range of material I can mold into shape, and this is what Ive come up with along with a bit of detail:

Idea 1:

Anime Fanfic: Ichigo 100%
Current Content List: Satsuki/Manaka, Toujou/Manaka, Nishino/Manaka and a few originals pairing with the characters... or perhaps a Toujou/Nishino/Manaka threesome

Theres plenty that can be written here, since theres a lot of ecchi material I can use from the original series to make a few spinoffs or what ifs. Unfortunately, I havent gone round to collecting the manga yet so my knowledge is pretty limited to the entire anime series and its OVAs. For the most part, it may turn out a little vanilla since Manaka is quite the gentleman. That is if I use his original character, or if I decide to not let Satsuki loose to indulge in her openly aggressive fawnings over Manaka.... *drools*.... Anyways, some scene ideas would be appreciated for this one.

Idea 2:

Anime Fanfic: Maburaho
Current Content List: Kuriko/Kazuki, Yuna/Kazuki, Shina/Kazuki (Oh yes, some lovin from the doc's ghost collecting assistant *wink wink*) and perhaps a few originals.... Maybe an orgy to spice things up a bit since most of the girls look incredible

Another particularly ecchi series thats easy to work with, since everyone is once again after the main character because of his apparent 'magic superpower seed'. Another vanilla possibility since Kazuki is a nice guy but I am considering the possibility of an 'inner beast' in the fellow.... a little twist as a side effect of his low magic spell count.

Idea 3: <Scratched>

Supposedly meant to be a School Days fanfic but I scrapped it because I dislike the main character Makoto so much.... His stupidity knows no bounds.... I may be persuaded to place a few other characters in situations that do not involve Makoto.

Idea 4: 'For Love and Country'

An original anime medieval story idea that plays with the idea of a captured princess and a number of other females by an evil overlord. I havent developed this idea much but its likely to begin with some rape play and S/M, two particular areas I have never written before. Beyond that, Im planning to involve the evil overlord's nephew befriend and fall for the princess, which would work toward a military coup for control of the kingdom. A little cliche I know, so I may be changing it a little here and there.

Idea 5: 'Secrets Be Secrets'

Another original story that works with a bit of brother sister forbidden love. Havent decided on a time setting but it may be set in the present or near future. The pairing will be part of a high standing family that owns a big company, and both are executives on the near top of the organisation. I'll be focusing a lot on thier struggles to keep thier secret relationship a secret from their family and friends.

Idea 6: 'A Gift from Hell'

This ones an anime story about a human being who accidently helps with the capture of a renegade demon in a hit and run accident. He later recieves a visit from the devil and is rewarded with something completely unexpected: the faithful services of a luscious, playful and incredibly oversexed succubus. I thought it would be interesting to see how such a story would turn out, especially how the human's life would turn out after the succubus moves into his home. Due to the nature of this story, a bit of comedy will be present. Cant help myself sometimes. Inspired by an unnamed movie Ive watched some time back.

Edit to Idea 6 Descript:

I put a bit more thought into it and I was thinking of throwing a severe opposite of the lucky succubus; a sweet angel whom the protaganist unintentionally saves from being taken advantage of. Because of this unexpected accidental act of chivalry, the young angel falls in love and bonds herself to his service without knowing that he was connected with his succubi. The result of her finally realizing will possibly be quite explosive. The story may then revolve around their relationships and thier adventures together, leading to a whole lot of pairing possibilities for me to toy with.

There we have it. 6 ideas now open for critiques, suggestions and comments.

davesmistress
04-10-2008, 10:24 AM
I dont know alot about Hentai so I would not know which one to suggest.....have you considered something along the lines of what is a popular topic images wise here?

Perhaps a Tentacles story?.....we really have not gotten to many story submissions here.

Good luck in your decision

Robopoop
04-10-2008, 11:23 AM
Thanks much. I would really need it especially since I have this wierd feeling the quality of my writing has dropped in recent months. I'll do my best nonetheless.

As for the tentacle story, Im not particularly sure on that. Im not the sort of person to get turned on by a tentacle fondling and penetrating various orifaces, but I really appreciate the suggestion. Anything upon anything that anyone can suggest I would gladly look over openly.

Since Im so entirely new here, I have no clue as to what kind of audience I'll be writing for, so Ive yet to find out what kind of popular topics that might appeal to some people. Hmm, guess I'll be doing some research then.

Ryoga_Kiwamu
04-10-2008, 11:35 AM
something romantic?:tongue:

IIA
04-10-2008, 11:42 AM
no need to get shy....

I'd go with 4 or either version of 6...

kyo45
04-10-2008, 06:39 PM
Your Idea 6: 'A Gift from Hell

It seems interesting here some ideas I think that could helps out on this story of your story. The main character should meet the devil girl girlfriends and he get like 4 or 5 devil girls living with him and they give him the greatest pleasure beyond his wildest dream. The main character should meet an angel girl too I think that if devils are involved in something angels should be involved somehow too. Another character in the story is a human girl she a friend of the main character she has some interest in the main character but she gets kind of caught up in the little devil orgy with the main character and his devil girl. Well this is like a hentai harem I love harems. I hope this helps you out on your story.

Robopoop
04-10-2008, 10:18 PM
From the comments I see here, it looks like idea 6 is going to be the one that takes the cake, probably going to turn into quite a multi-chapter epic too. I can now see it to be complete with some fantasy, romance and comedy all put together (maybe some drama too). .... I think it'll definately work :).

Responding to kyo45's post, thats exactly what I have in mind for a 4th or 5th chapter, only that the original number of devil girl girlfriends number up to 10. Yes, its crazy for the poor protaganist so I guess I'll limit it to about 4 or so. Same goes for the angel girl, where 4 of her friends would show up on a mission of 'divine justice'. It might just turn our into quite a mixed orgy between them if I throw in a few male friends of the protaganist. As for the human girl being the dark horse, I'm not entirely sure since there will already be quite a few characters in the story. I'll have to think on this a little.

Thanks for the feedback, everyone. More would be appreciated for the other ideas too if any. Meanwhile I'll get on to working on a brief skeleton for idea 6.

Side note: I love harem hentai too. :)

darkmagis
07-24-2008, 10:35 PM
only thing i could suggest is a Lot of intament Touching with words of descriptive sexual emotions from each gental touch of a womens breast of when she suckles to tip of his head make the reader get the total Idea from every inch of the body as if to make them imagine what was going on if it was them doing these things. like a shy girl doing it for her first time and she does it with an exsperience man who do this and that to her and drives her into total Madness.

piernik
08-04-2008, 01:59 AM
Idea 7: General Daimos.

We need Daimos in hentai version ;)